Hi All,
My first effort to sing a song. please watch and do comment and provide any improvement that i can do to make next song better. :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ph7ONWIzKKg

मलाई राम्रो लाग्यो आकाश ब्रो को पहिलो गीत \ music arrange एकदम राम्रो छ \ गाएकी पनि राम्रो छ , पहिलो चोटी नै एस्तो राम्रो छ , अनि ब्रो ले गुरुदेव कामत संग vocal को तालिम गर्नु भएको रैछ \ अझै धेरै आभ्यास गर्दै गयो भने सुर ताल मा अझै निखार आउछ \ यो गीत त कुनै movie मा राख्ने जस्तो लाग्यो - अलि अलि गजलको flavor पनि रैछ - एसको प्रकारको कुनै नाम छ होला हैन ?, आफुलाई चै तेस्तो technical कुरा थाहा छैन \ Congratulations ओन your first song एंड good luck इन your future projects \

thank you cha tapai lie.. yo pahilo choti gayeko le dherai kura sikiyo..
aaba auda ajai sajilo huncha hola..
ani yo song adhunik nai ho but halka gajal ani kawali (sufi) jasto flavour cha.. ma sanga ne teti khasai music ko knowledge chaina..but maile yo kawali style le compose gareko thiye.. yo adhunik ma nai parcha... ani dherai dhanyabad cha tapai ko valuable feedback ko lagi.. sadhai yahi expect garne chu tapai bata..

thank you..
:)

We can see you have the vocal range and potential but its too raw. Yeso singing lessons liye huncha kunai experienced teachers baat. It will really expediate your learning process if you are serious about it. Natra ta timro singing ko knowledge general population ko level mai cha jasto lagyo.

thank you for your valuable feedback. I am taking vocal class ( classical )from last one and half year with gurudev kamath.
thank you again.

thank you for your comments and support.