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IndisGuise
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Posted on 03-22-06 2:39
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As I packed my bags, Suitcases filled with cloths And my modest belongings My precious plants, framed pictures, and old souvenirs All neatly boxed, wrapped and ready to be shipped Tired, I sit on my couch Thirstily I raise a bottle of water and gulp My eyes flutter - could it be a sign? I laid on my bed, closed my eyes, And then slowly raised my eyelids On the corner, next to the closet I saw a white plastic bag Neglected, wearied, dusty and torn I stared at it for a moment Heartbeat loud, paced faster As if it is you in front of me Stupid me! Slowly to the corner, I picked - opened You smile from the top of the piles You have not changed How can you? This was a mere picture It does not change Unlike you... And me... Then there was this other one, between friends How that camera caught us stealing those glance And remember the one in which you cried? I kept on teasing you until you dried. Those letters with few words Inks faded, hardly readable But amazingly, it's engraved, In my soul How is it possible? I do not even love you anymore.
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SunnyDev
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Posted on 04-04-06 3:39
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Again another one to ponder. :-| Man, what comes in your mind? You remind me of my friend ; He once said "Kill me and I am free." And here you say "rip me off and I'll come alive." Anyway, Sinking in the river of denial, you will be embraced by mighty ocean. I feel I have been at least. Unrequited love has given alittle bit of selflessness, lot of indifference and emancipation from attachments. I am as if in the blissful state of nirvana.
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Felicity
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Posted on 04-04-06 3:59
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u should have them published. great work, Indi...
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Ma Chameli
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Posted on 04-06-06 10:34
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Great as always.. "On this day" made me feel great and "Make me Alive" made me go have some rounds of margarita. Awesome..
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flip_flop
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Posted on 04-06-06 1:04
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Good to see something different. Good work Indi.
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Posted on 04-06-06 1:24
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OGOD! I log onto Sajha after ages today... TO see Indisguise turning into Alanis Morissette.... Damn! Metamorphosis... you should name it instead of Chronicles...
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Posted on 04-06-06 3:23
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Indisguise, thats some good work you've done. I kinda feel the "pain" thru your poems. Been there, done that! re kya! lol don't really have to be "pain" but i know what you're trying to say. I FEEL YOU! now now, don't go there! if some one's thussa, i've tried to "manaying" them, but i've learned to ignore. who cares, i am not gonna die, would i? i don't care anymore
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redstone
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Posted on 04-06-06 3:24
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crap, that just rhymed didin't it!? i am becoming like you! NOO! lol!
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IndisGuise
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Posted on 04-07-06 12:40
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Sunnydev, "Kill me and I'm free?" Was your pal a "Neta" ? hahaha I bet he was. I took the liberty of assuming that is must be a "he" considering the possibilities of that person being a "she," in my humble opinion, is zilch. Let me not even go on to elaborate why. Women eh! :) Emancipated? Lucky you! I once wrote a piece on this emancipation - an impromptu anecdote while I was an insomniac zombie. Am still seeking one. And I being in the state of nirvana is completely hinged on her hormones. Know what I mean? LOL.;) My friend, before I shall be consumed by the mighty ocean, I intend to sink in every river of denial. Coz once I am embraced by the mighty ocean, there is no escape. Just some philosophical ranting!:p Keep em coming! -------------------------------------------------------- Felicity, only if your promise to pay/buy. :p Deal? Hehehe ;) -------------------------------- Ma_Chameli, Good that you felt good. But some rounds of margarita in the mid-afternoon? Would not that make you a female version of Devdas? India ma Paro Nepal ma Chameli hehehe ;) Did you trash those cloths with unpleasant memories? :) --------------------------------- Flip_flop, Variety is spice of life. Don't you think so? I bet you concur with me. Thanks.
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IndisGuise
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Posted on 04-07-06 12:47
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Whateva, Alanis Morissette eh'? Glad you did not say Britney Spears or someone akin to that genre. I would have committed virtual sucide ;) Metamorphosis? Hmm. . . I kind of concur with you on this one. Is not that "IRONIC" ? :) P.S: Next time you log in, how about considering Bob Dylan? LOL -------------------------------------------------------------- Reddy le pani lekhcha. What about that poem that you had in your profile? Hehe "Manaying" - "them" ? "THEM"???????????? Now that was a blunder. One at a time brother.;) Hahaha. By the way where is our Babyphat aka our dear Canadian sweetheart? I hope her computer starts to act funny and she shows up here. I bet quite a few people miss her. I sure do. I bet highfly bro does. What about you reddy? Don't you? LOL Hahaha. ;) ----------------------------- Many thanks for dropping and much appreciation to all and sundry. :) Few more entries perhaps and I shall bid adieu. Tried one right now but deleted it. Mutu bata awaz naako jasto bho ke hahahahaha... anyways.. will feed more asap. ;) Happy friday! IndisGuise:)
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IndisGuise
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Posted on 04-07-06 12:50
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Read as: "Felicity, only if you promise to pay/buy. :p"
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SunnyDev
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Posted on 04-07-06 6:50
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You have the control. Spray some testosterone, natural/artificial , no bar. Try that --- Maukama Mutu pani bolihalcha kee? he he ;-)
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Posted on 04-07-06 11:54
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Ek purana mausam lauta.. Yaad bhari purwai bhi.. Aisa to kam hi hota hai.. wo bhi ho tanhayi bhi.. The above lines of Javed Akhtar have fueled my enthusiam for writing something so, here it goes 'IN SEARCH' He came out of pines circled around few times mesmerised my soul fragmented puzzle became whole Strolled together through cypress groves amazed by his graceful moves two melted hearts full of love amalgamated and flew above to reside in starry abode Oh my lord! how could i deny? have i sensed the missing piece? now my puzzle looks incomplete I searched him in rough thickets I sketched him in dusty roads I heard him in babbling brooks I smelt him in rose gardens and felt him as I stepped onto manicured lawns Help me put together my missing puzzle I am longing see you chuckle Don’t we go together like a wink & smile. No matter where you are when you left, I lost a part of me. Fill your days with smiles...
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flip_flop
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Posted on 04-08-06 12:06
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IndisGuise
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Posted on 04-13-06 12:45
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Sunnydev, I did try your suggestion and guess what, I think I over did it. And the result was obvious. Quantity was high, but quality was hardly worth a look. Did not pass the quality control test if I may put it in business terminology. But, by virtue of being a Nepali, I can take a liberty to just bribe myself and skip the quality control process itself. Stay tuned hai ta :) ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Vantang bhuntung puwaainttttt, Damn, that "puawaaitt" word reminded me of this work called "pwat" that few of the folks I knew back home associated with a hot female on the prowl. I have a hunch, or better still, I am confident that the word can be aptly associated with someone on advantageous summit. Re kya;) I love that Jagjit Singh song. Been a while now. Geet ko kaam chai ke thiyo re. "Aisa to kam hi hota hai.. wo bhi ho tanhayi bhi.." Daaami!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) And very poignant piece up there. Beautiful! But think of it this way - You just lost a part of yourself - some people like yours truly, have lost everything, including the feeling of actually feeling the pain that would make us realize that we did in fact lost the whole of ourselves. But on the retrospective, I say - Thoda barbaad huwe to kya barbaad huwe Kuch yesa karo, ki hum firse aabaad hi na ho sake.:) Damn! Keta le dincha time time ma. LOL. Hahaha. (Yes, I have learned to appreciate myself. :p) Keep it coming folks... IndisGuise:)
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IndisGuise
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Posted on 04-13-06 12:48
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Read as - "Geet ko NAAM chai ke thiyo re?" "But on the retrospective, I would still have said - " Ignore other typos:O
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redstone
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Posted on 04-13-06 3:27
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i thought when you said keta, you meant vantage. pachi myself re ! LOL
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IndisGuise
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Posted on 04-13-06 3:32
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Raate, At times, we have to learn to entertain ourselves. Ki kaso? ;) Afule le lekhe chi myself nai ta ho ni. Khai ta your mixtures? Vantang bhuntung pwaaint lai ma kina keta bhannu ni? Apsara pani Keta huncha mora?:p IndisGuise:)
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Felicity
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Posted on 04-13-06 3:34
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hare...narnia bhanna thaneko maile ta hehe;)
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Ma Chameli
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Posted on 04-13-06 3:45
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IndisGuise, Margarita at any time. though not quite a Devdas yet.
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IndisGuise
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Posted on 04-13-06 5:12
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Felicity, :(. Narnia is fake and this is too. See the connotation? hehe ;) ------------------ Ma Chameli, Not a Devdas yet? I thought that should have been Paro. Hoina? Anyways, I think your magarita and my JD are awaiting for us. Cheers for tonight. Sa se sayeri, Sa se saher, Sa se sawal aur Sa se Sarabbbbbbbbbbbbb. Hahahaha. :) ------------------------ Next episode is due tonight-mrow. Hope something will come up tonight ;) Later folks... IndisGuise:) P.S: Felicity, i am waiting for my check ;)
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