सम्पूर्ण मित्रहरु,
म यहाँ एउटा नँया शीर्षक शुरु गर्दैछु, जँहा हामीले एउटा फोटो र त्यस सँग सम्बन्धित कबिता कोर्नेछौ।अझ भनौ न आफ्नो गाँउ- सहरको फोटोलाई सुन्दर भावनाका बान्किले कुद्ने छौ। मेरो पालन पोषण र शिक्षादि नवलपरासीमा भए पनि, मेरो जन्म पाल्पाको तानसेनमा भएको हो। यस अर्थमा पाल्पा सँग मेरो भावनात्मक सम्बन्ध छ। मेरो यो प्रयास हाम्रो सम्बन्धको सेतुलाई उजागर गर्ने एउटा जमर्को हो। सँधै जस्तो यहाँहरुको सहभागिताको अपेक्षा मैले राखेको छु।

सधन्यबाद!
सुरेन
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पाल्पा मेरो आँखामा

सुर्योदयको हँसिलो मुस्कान सँगै
श्रीनगर डाँडा माथि सुनौलो किरणले मेरो गाँउ चुम्छ
रातको अन्धकार रूपी अट्टहास निल्दै
धुपि-सल्लाको पातहरु फहराउदै
रम्भापानीको सेपिलो गुँरास बन, रम्भादेबी हाम्री कूल देबी
पर्भासको नीलकमल फेरि जुर्मुराउछ नौलो बिहानी सँगै
मदन पोखराका कफि खेतहरु झुमेर नाच्छन्
तिम्रो मुटु भएर बग्ने माडी खोला
महाभारत पहाडका नागबेलीसँग डुडुल्किएर
खेतका गह्रा-गह्रा भिजाउदै
बेसीका खेतालासँग झ्याउरे नाच्छन्

सत्यवतीमा भाकल गर्ने तिर्थालुहरु
बहिरी सत्वती मातासँग चिच्याई-चिच्याई आशिष माग्दा
कराङ-कुरुङ दक्षिणोन्मुख यात्रामा बिचरण गर्दछन्
मित्यालको टोपि खस्ने उकालोमा
नून-तेलको भारि बोकेका ढाक्रेहरु
कौरा, घाँटु घन्किरहेका मगर गाँउ हुँदै
?ओके बाजे? सँग हातमेलो गर्दै
कुटो,कोदालो लिएर बाटो खन्छन्
बिकाश र सम्भावनाका गोरेटो पहिल्याउदै
जातिय बिभिदतता र पाल्पाली सभ्यतालाई
टँडिखेलमा कवाज खेलिरहेका पाईलाहरु लेफ्ट-राइटमा पोख्छन्
मलाई थाहा छ म तिमिलाई अँगाल्न सक्दिन
म काली किनारको रानि महल सरि एक्लिएको छु
तर म तिमिलाई अनुभूत गरिरहेछु, तिम्रो न्यानोपन, ढाकाको न्यानोपन
तिम्रा गुँरास फूल टिप्न सक्दिन, तिम्रो आँसु पुछ्न नै
न त खन्ती,गैंती बोकेर हेक्लाङको बाटो खन्न सक्छु
तथापि हजारौं कोश टाढा यस बिरानो भूमिमा
मेरो ह्दय निकट छौ, मेरो आँखामा
प्रीय! पाल्पा मेरो आँखामा

RuIna jee...tapai ko Sajha kai photo jasta ko tastai yaha tasera kabita banako ho hai......Tapai ko original hoina bhane thikai chha , ho bhane pani na rishaunu hai...testo naramro kura maile ta kehi lekhya chhaina ni........ramrai ramro chha.......aba aru le naramro comment gare bhane chai pheri Sajha le hatai dela...........Tyo asti ko DC/ newyork wala photo hataye jastai.........

i was literally looking at computer before i even thought of replying..
never imagined my pic would be posted like this.....kind of shock bhayera jhandai dic bhayeko..

kalo bhale jee,>>>>>>>>
its kind of falttering to see myself through ur poem as well as its kind of annoying .
aba khusi pani bhannu sakdina kuna ma utheko rish pani pokhnu sakdina...


colour blindness chaina raicha hajur lai dekhera khusi lagyo
yo biarag ko jeewan ma kina yasto anauthoo thread ayo?

bahini bhannu huncha ani kina forum ma photo tasnu huncha
kavita ta la thikkai thioo photo kasto lagyo po bhannu huncha?!

rishau ki khusi hau ma bujna sakeko chiana ajaa samma
bintii cha bhanidinu na san lai delete garnu bhanee yo kura.


p.s>>>>> narishaunu bhannu huncha tara sakdeena nii rish uthda raicha nadhatee bahnchu ma....kina lekhnu parthiyo ra kavita chindai nachini kana.:@
aba thank u bhannu ki nabhannu:@ rish uthirakheko cha...hya bhandina au hajur lai thank u sank u grrrrrrrr


dada;
k ho hajur chai jahile pani fori cha bahek kuraai hunna baa!!
hyaa alchi lagi sakyo hajur lai samjhaunda samjhaunda.


nepe sir;
nice slok out there.
evergreen fan of ur peom and gazal:)

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? ? ??? ???, ???? ????? ???????? ??, ???? ??? ??????? ?? ???????

I wonder why there is Font problem.

I agree with Ruina.
My Haikus doesn't meet the quality for this thread.
San bro, will you delete Dada_Giri's posting above.

hey dada!!
maile tyasto bhannu khojeko hoina:( sachai kasam hoina
maile ta hajur lai ma soji ho bhannu khojeko kura bujnu hunna
ani malai ruIna le nak fori matrai bhannu huncha bhannu khojeko

sachai promise hajur ko kavita ekdam ramro cha:(
sorry maile arkai bhannu khoojeko hajur le arkai bujnu bhayeko.

RuIna Jee,

Tapai ta aashu kabi jasto hunu hudo rahecha.... je bhaye pani tapai ko kura maan paryo, Kura kina yesto mitho huncha bhaneko ta manche nai Ramri hunuhudo rahecha..
tapai ko lagi ta Yo geet thikka hune rahecha......

" Timro Muhara ma Jyoti Jhalkincha
Unko Muskana ma Moti talkincha"

chinna sakne unlai, yestai cha hai CHino
Bhaideu aaunalai bolyayo mayale
ekali chu ma MAYALU




Risani maaf hola hai RuIna Jee

LOL
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Asadyeai ramro dhago raicha yo. Kudos to all of you. Yo dhago Indi lai maan paryo.:).
Kina Ruina ko fotu taseko hola mora bhale le. Arko dhashain ma baki rakhdina mo. :- O
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Ani yo dada giri le ni 'indi' lai yeta uta jodera naak nai katnu atyo. Kahile tissue deko cha bhancha kahile naakai fodiyo mero bhancha. Mutu fodiyo bhaneni allagai hunthiye ni.:p

Aba tyo ta malai tha cha ke diyo ke foriyo bhanera ;).
Natra ruina lai:p re kya.

Na tum(dada giri) jano na woh (aru).
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Hai hai hai...;)
Ruina :)

In jest,
IndisGuise:)

O san bro,
La yaar mero mathi ko RuIna BUINI wala photo ra kabita delete gari dinu paryo ........

YO KURA RUINA BUINI LAI MANN PARENA.....(RAATE KO STYLE MA)

Aba RuIna BUINI sarai rishayekole mero mann pagliyo....ra maile sachnai nai galtee garechhu kyare jattikai lagyo.....

Hariyo danda, seto Himal, chang chang khola...........adi adi kura ko matra kabita aayo yo thread ma , yeso kata kata bata RuIna BUINI ko ID ma click garya ta....Aha kati ramro photo raichha maile ta mann thamnai sakina ni hou.....LOL .....Hamro RuIna BUINI ko soundarya k tyo khola, Danda, ra Himal bhanda kum chha ta? Aba malai pani photo dekhne bittikai Kabita phuri halyo tyahi bhayera po lekhya ta RuIna Jyu.............
TYo ke re... Mona Lisa ...ko bhanda kum chha ta hamro RuIna buini ko muskaan?
Kabita phuryo kyare.lekhidiye.............Lu jaa........J parla parla bhanera ni.......


.........Anh sachhai, RuIna ji, Maile tapailai BAHINI ta bhanya hoina ni..........BUINI po bhanya ta..............BUINI sanga chai milyo bhane j pani chalchha hai bhannu hunthyo hamra Baje le.........:P

p.s>>>>> narishaunu bhannu huncha tara sakdeena nii rish uthda raicha nadhatee bahnchu ma....kina lekhnu parthiyo ra kavita chindai nachini kana.:@
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K garne RuIna jee, Pahila ta RuIna bhanera matra chinya thiyo (tyo pani duplicate naam hola), aba ahile photo dekhe pachi ta chinna matra hoina.............SAAT SAMUNDAR PAAR MAI TERE PICHE PICHE AGAYA>>>>>>>>>bhandai afno computer ma chirera tapai ko computer bata niskana parla jasto chha........he he he he he

Bhupi's self potrait:-


?e"kL? z]/rg
-Jo?\UofTds ;]Nkm kf]6?]6_

s]xL n]V5go;f] x]5{glrQ a'?b}g
clg s]5{gk'gM n]V5gk'gM x]5{gnfdf] ;f; km]5{gs7}a/f, lar/f
?e"kL? z]/rg ?

Sorry, the text and the lines were jumbled up.

Another of Bhupi's spellbinding poem on "shahids" of Nepal. Ironically, more than eleven thousand stars have fallen from Nepal's sky, still the formation of peaceful Nepal is far from the horizon.


e"lk z]/rg

zxLbx?sf] ;D?gfdf
x'Fb}g laxfg ld/ld/] tf/f ?/]/ guP
aGb}g d'n's b'O?rf/ ;k"t d/]/ guP
cf]7df xfF;f], ufnfdf nfnL ta cfpF5 hut\sf]
b]zsf] kL/n] e]6L ha jL/n] r9fpF5 /utsf]
3fF6Ldf kmfF;Lsf] dfnf ufF;L jL/n] xfF:tf
dft[e"dLs]f r/0f 9f]lu efUb5 bf;tf
pd|Gg af]6 s;}n] aLpF 5/]/ guP
xfdLn] vfg] k|To]s ufF;df /ut 5 zxLbsf]
xfdLn] km]g]{ k|To]s ;f;df /ut 5 zxLbsf]
xfd|f] d'6'sf] k|To]s rfndf 5 w6sg zxLbsf]
xfd|f] v';Lsf] k|To]s kndf 5 hLjg zxLbsf]
kfpg] lyPgf} v'zL ltgn] 5f8]/ guP
xfdLn] cf?gf] st{Jo lj;]{ Oltxf;n] lwsfnf{
uf]ln lgn]sf zxLbsf Kof/f tL nfzn] lwsfnf{
w/tLn] d'v nfhn] 5f]Knf, cfsfzn] lwsfnf{
zxLb /f]nfg\ xfdLn] pGglt u/]/ guP
x'b}g laxfg ld/ld/] tf/f ?/]/ guP
aGb}g d'n"s b'O?rf/ ;k"t d/]/ guP ?

humm, sabai jana ruina bainiko pachhi kin lagchhan bhanthe! aaj balla thaha bhayo. ke garnu, "uni" pani sajhaland tir bela-belama jhulkinchhin, ma ta lagdin hai pachhi. anaways, you guys have fun ni. Time for me to post the most revered poem collection of Bhupi- "Ghumne mech mathi andho maanchhe".

Suren,
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www.paradesh.com

RATO RA CHANDRA SURYA, JANGEE NISSAN HAMRO
JIUDO RAGAT SARI YO, BALDO YO SAAN HAMRO

HIMAL JHAI ATAL YO, JHUKENA YO KAHILE
LATRENA YO KAHILE, JANGEE NISSAN HAMRO

YO JANMADAI JAGAT MA KAIYEU PRAHAR AAYE
SAMRAJYA DUI HARE HARENA SAAN HAMRO

GAI SARI CHHAN SADHU JO JO YAHA JAGAT MA
SAB KO SARAN BALIYO JANGEE NISSAN HAMRO

JABA SAMMA CHANDRA SURYA AAKASH MA RAHANCHHAN
TABA SAMMA HUNCHHA AFNAI RATO RAGAT YO HAMRO

(12 barsha jati aghi padya samjhera lekhya, joog bhai sakyo ulta pulta bhaye maaf pau.........writer Gopal prasad Rimal jasto lagchha ..am not sure sorry guys.....tara kabita ta khatra chha ni ek patak gauda 4 thau jwalamukhi jane jasto.......i really like it.)

wiz kid jee;
thank u:) ashu kavi re! najiskaunu na auu..ma ta kavi ko k pani aundaina.
arko kura ...>>tyo song ta maile kahile sunekai chaina:(

indisguise;
Aba tyo ta malai tha cha ke diyo ke foriyo bhanera ;).
Natra ruina lai:p re kya..............>>>
indi baba :) khoi malai kehi thaaha chiana:(
kan ma khussuka bhana ta samjhinchu ki.

kalo bhale jee;
tyati dherai samman dinu bhayeko ma dhanyabad:)

......Anh sachhai, RuIna ji, Maile tapailai BAHINI ta bhanya hoina ni..........BUINI po bhanya ta..............BUINI sanga chai milyo bhane j pani chalchha hai bhannu hunthyo hamra Baje le.........:P...................>>>>>>>
maile bujeena, hosh nabujekai thik cha hola:)

aba ahile photo dekhe pachi ta chinna matra hoina.............SAAT SAMUNDAR PAAR MAI TERE PICHE PICHE AGAYA>>>>>>>>>bhandai afno computer ma chirera tapai ko computer bata niskana parla jasto chha...

abhuiiii natarsaunuu naaa aghi bharkhar bhoot ko flim hereko..


suredras dai(well bahini bhannu bhayo hehe soo);
hajur ko thread ma ali kati nachaiyeena kura haru lekhe maile..
sabai ramrai chalirakheko thiyo bichha ma ali katii khissa bhayo nii mero
posting le garera?...nadekheko jasto garnu la:o)

Laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa hau, ruIna jee ko barema kati raamro thread recha, maile ta thyakkai miss gare ni, diuso nai hernu parne recha. Khai kta haru le gaadi kinne bhanera lagera ta ho ni, sabai barbaad bhako.
Ruina jee ko phutu herera ta malai pani dui chaar sabda lekhna mun laageko thiyo, hoooooos aba dhila bhai sakyo, jasto cha.

tai paani haldi haalam na bhanera ni. Completely dedicated to ruIna jee, kya .

har ek baat pe kehte ho tum ke 'too kya hai' ?
tumheeN kaho ke yeh andaaz-e-guftgoo kya hai ?

[ guftgoo = conversation ]

2. na shole meiN yeh karishma na barq meiN yeh ada
koee batao ki woh shoKH-e-tund_KHoo kya hai ?

[ barq = lightning, tund = sharp/angry, KHoo = behavior ]

3. yeh rashk hai ki wo hota hai ham_suKHan tumse
wagarna KHauf-e-bad_aamozi-e-adoo kya hai ?

[ rashk = jealousy, ham_suKHan = to speak together/to agree,
KHauf = fear, bad = bad/wicked, aamozee = education/teaching,
adoo = enemy ]

4. chipak raha hai badan par lahoo se pairaahan
hamaaree jeb ko ab haajat-e-rafoo kya hai ?

[ pairaahan = shirt/robe/cloth, haajat = need/necessity,
rafoo = mending/darning ]

5. jalaa hai jicm jahaaN dil bhee jal gaya hoga
kuredate ho jo ab raakh, justjoo kya hai ?

[ justjoo = desire ]

6. ragoN meiN dauDte phirne ke ham naheeN qaayal
jab aaNkh hee se na Tapka to phir lahoo kya hai ?

7. woh cheez jiske liye hamko ho bahisht azeez
siwaay baada-e-gul_faam-e-mushkaboo kya hai ?

[ bahisht (or bihisht, both are correct) = heaven, baada = wine,
gul_faam = delicate and fragrant like flowers, mushkaboo = like
the smell of musk ]

8. piyooN sharaab agar KHum bhee dekh looN do chaar
yeh sheesha-o-qadah-o-kooza-o-suboo kya hai ?

[ KHum = wine barrel, qadah = goblet, kooza/suboo = wine pitcher ]

9. rahee na taaqat-e-guftaar, aur agar ho bhee
to kis ummeed pe kahiye ke aarzoo kya hai ?

[ guftaar = speech/discourse ]

10. huaa hai shaah ka musaahib, phire hai itaraata
wagarna shehar meiN 'GHalib' kee aabroo kya hai ?

[ musaahib = comrade/associate ]


Source google

La ta maile pani ruina ko photo herea sanyo prayas gareko chu hai


Manda manda muskan lagacha gaagri bata chalkidai cha
Te kaala kaapal chopdachan te himuchuli sari laaj
Naakh le boodh garda cha te himal ka chuli haru
ani saalak mileka tee aanulahru jaagechan bhawana ma
Timra harek aadhar le mohit pari rahecha yuva ka maan
Laagcha tyaagi dinchu timra nimti ghar baar sansar
kasto mitho raang ko sweater le dhakecha sarir
sagarmatha ma hune surya assta ko hudaincha aavash
Bhana timi ko ho ruina, mero sapana ko pratibimba bani
bolai rahechau malia yekanta ma mero peeda lai bhulayera
ho maa janwar thiye yo birano sansar ma
paribartan gardai chau malai timi le manuse ma
Ma ta bhanchu timi nai ho mero sapana ko chitra
aba na ta mero jeevan maa dukha na ta beechitra

Esto Lagchha.
- Bhupi.

Esto lagcha
Mero mastishka bhari euta ghaaite gaun paltieko chha Vietnamko
Ragatamya, chitkar ra hahakar bich kaniraheko.

Esto lagchha
Mero mutu bhitra Prague ko euta balatkrit sadak tersieko chha
Asankhya tank ra fauji boot haru muni chhiya chhiya pareko.

Esto lagchha
Ma Bolivia ko jungle ma ubhieko euta rukh hu
Jasko Hanga mathi basera
Che Guevara le dairy lekhi rahechha.

Pratyak naya din
Esto lagchha
Ma baseko esto Aeroplane ho
Jo kunai chhend pani Hijacking dwara
Arkai disha tarfa modina sakchha.

Bhupi kai arko:

Chumban

Timilai dekhe pachhi sadhai malai
Euta mitho nyano
Paap garna mann lagchha.

Timro woth ma euta prastab dekhchhu
Jass mathi
Malai Afno woth le
Sahi chhap garna mann lagchha.

A loose translation of a poem I had written in English, for a real life and a real person ;-)
And the original poem has been published twice, once in my college newsletter and then in Suskera in Jan 2002. Here's the link to the original poem:

- http://www.suskera.com/jan2002/message.html

तिमीले पठाएको रित्तो चिठी
नेपे

तिमीले पठाएको रित्तो चिठी
रित्तो थिएन

हो,
त्यो नाङ्लोमा थपक थपक हालिएको मस्यौरा जस्तै
आकाशको पूर्वनिर्धारित स्थानमा थपक्क बसेका जून र ताराहरु बोकेको
रात जस्तो थिएन
न त
सूर्यलाई उदरखुट्टी बोकेर
सकि नसकि हिंडीरहेको दिन जस्तो

त्यो त
बरु
मिर्मिरे जस्तो थियो
शान्त, ताजा र सिनित्त सफा
वा
सन्ध्याकाल जस्तो
प्रशान्त
विश्रामरत
र कसैको आगमनको प्रतिक्षारत

अथवा
मानौं
बिहानको शान्त फेवा
हावाको एक फाँको सट्ट आईदिन के बेर

अथवा
दन्त्यकथाको त्यो बगैचा
जहाँ अदृश्य फूलहरु फूल्दथे
सुगन्ध भएर

क्यानभासको त्यो चित्र
जुन कुनै आकस्मिक वाध्यतामा
हतार हतार मेट्न परेको थियो
यो शिघ्र विश्वासमा
कि
उसका सपना-आँखाले त देखिहाल्छ नि
उसका हृदय-ईजेलले त टाँगिहाल्छ नि

यो "न" नभएको नाई
यो "हो" नभएको स्वीकार
यो समापन बिनाको अन्त्य
यो भूमिका नभएको शुरुवात

तिमीले रित्तो चिठी

सहस्र आवाजहरुलाई निलेर बसेको मौनता

प्रियतम

तिम्रो चिठीलाई अर्थ्याउने प्रयासलाई विश्राम दिएर
केवल त्यसको अनुभूतिमा जब रम्दै गएँ
तिम्रो कस्सम
तिम्रो रित्तो चिठीमा
हजारौं हजार अक्षरहरु देखें

र धन्य भएँ ।