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Moneyminded
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Posted on 12-09-04 3:02
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Its not my original idea. I saw it in a couple of forums and thought some of you may find it intersting. Here's the deal. Everybody adds exactly 3 sentences to continue the story. you can write anything and change the theme in anyway but your three sentences should be the continuation of the preceding sentence. Here it goes... Naniram was having his first date with a sweet girl at Tudikhel... Then suddenly they were aware of the " pratigaman biruddhako andolan" coming from ratna park... terrorized by the agitation, Naniram ...
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oys_chill
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Posted on 12-09-04 11:54
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..hey ram! says the psychiatrist. " you are not in the mental hospital. you are here for a therapy remember? Naniram nods his head "you have a vivid imagination naniram. you should stop going to ratnapark, and go to godavari for a change... the very thought of godavari breathes a new life on him and off he goes...........
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How Bizarre!!
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Posted on 12-09-04 11:59
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Hehe Thanks Oys for continuing on my story... :o)
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DC_Girl
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Posted on 12-09-04 12:01
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its like watching sliding doors...uummm....Naniram's thoughts drift from one end to the other...robots and his bath tub...back to Ratnapark and titaura...highschool sweetheart. but then it halts back where it had started...and he starts musing again...aja sajhabasi haru lai jhada pakhala lagya jasto cha...compulsive liar, chilliness, ani kati wota floyds haru...he goes back to the hospital...
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compulsive_liar_
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Posted on 12-09-04 12:03
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he goes back to the hospital....then he sees a guy sitting on his bed wearning nothing but just a white jacket (a long one covering everything).He scream "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo this can't happen to me.Not again.I dont want to see white" like in one of those hindi movies.Then he starts running....there is a backgroud music and he is in slow motion....
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Pink_floyd
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Posted on 12-09-04 12:03
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like watching sliding doors ummm......... Then he feels his hear pounding like a bass drum, dhook, dhook, and he thinks something is going to happe, then he realizes that he has just unlocked the secret to material and time travel, he could transform himself into waves and travel like dreams.... he can be in thepacific ocean sometime and be in 2036 sometime...
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Pink_floyd
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Posted on 12-09-04 12:09
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the background music is the song " run like hell" and he is running like hell and then he falls. just then a soft beautiful silky smooth warm hands appear in front of him, and he catches teh hand and gets up. very suprised to see pragys his old highschool sweetheart he grabs a rose from the side of the shrub and gives it to her and takes his wallet out and showing her the mirror says what do u see? she replies a beautiful thing and he says no i see two beautiful thing, and she kisses him on the cheek saying thankyou, waited ofr u to do this from along time.............
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How Bizarre!!
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Posted on 12-09-04 12:11
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he is in slow motion ... Unfortunately he was in hospital so every one was wearig white... we was running as fast as he could and suddenly someting caught his attention... There was a man standing wearing a green pants, yeallow shirt, red sunglasses...It was non-other than our govinda baba.... he goes runing towards him and says...baba save me from...
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Pink_floyd
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Posted on 12-09-04 12:15
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then he smiles, and she says:- did the sun just got brighter or did u just smile at me? and then love signs and heart signs fly all over the place.... he thinks to himslef :- i love this girl............ she thinks :- i love this man, they were just about to hug and she sees her parents in the motorbike and says we have to go NOW. and they catch a safa tempo to swayambhu ans gets down
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compulsive_liar_
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Posted on 12-09-04 12:21
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baba....girl...baba...girl... Now he is very confused and he starts to lie to himself and he becomes the compulsive liar.His first lie he tells baba/girl "i am ricki martin and i....
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Pink_floyd
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Posted on 12-09-04 12:23
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and then paragya slaps him in his face and remembers that he is not a compulsive liar, she sit in the small restaurant in swayambhu and talk about life and what their ambition is. he says he wants to go to the US and be rich. she says i cannot go because her parents are too conservative to let a girl go alone.
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KaLaNkIsThAn
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Posted on 12-09-04 12:25
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... I am Ricky Martin and I "Livin' the vida Loca"". The girl smiles and says "Oh yeah? then Voulez-vous coucher avec moi ce soir?"... The guy faints. He opens his eyes, he again sees a lady in black... where am I? He thinks...
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compulsive_liar_
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Posted on 12-09-04 12:25
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alone....and he looks around he finds himself alone in the dark Pacific ocean swimming trying to reach US,his dream.Then he sees a WHITE shark....
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oys_chill
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Posted on 12-09-04 12:26
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..let the girl go alone. They decide to forget bout their dilemmas and go to Jai Nepal Hall for a movie. Hero no. 1 is playing. They get the balcony seats while the hooligans shout from the back. naniram thinks of stopping by Naxal for a plate of everest momo after the movie....he wonders if pragya will like it too ?...
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Pink_floyd
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Posted on 12-09-04 12:35
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pragys says: - oh i love momo, i just don't wanna come here alone and eat it. and then he says well i know of a better place to eat than everest momo, its a small restaurant in naxal called kathmandu valley restaurant they have the best momo ever. she says ok, and they go to eat mom, she is blushing all the way and he has a smile on his face, they look content, like nothing can stop them now, theu eat and he drops her home with a heavy heart. she gets home and her parents saw her in ratnapark so they ask her who the guy was and why was he so close to her, she shivers and says he is just a friend, she is soo terrified by now that she doesn't knwo what to do, she sees herself in the mirror and thinks what he said in ratnapark about seeing two different beautiful things, and blushes but can't stop crying, she things what if and all thos " if" questions, then she decides she is going to US with him too.
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DC_Girl
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Posted on 12-09-04 12:37
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Pragya says its getting dark...Naniram had fainted earlier because he couldnt understand French. So Pragya asks again...Pouvez-vous me tomber de ? This time he says, lets just go eat everest momo and i'll do whatever you want me to...
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KaLaNkIsThAn
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Posted on 12-09-04 12:49
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... do whatever you want me to. Pragya thinks, is this guy a joke or something? My last date at least took me to Nanglo. Ah well, lets try everest momo, what the hell, she thinks. They go to the Everest Momo Centre and there is this handsome dude collecting the money. She thinks he is the manager. Pragya and momo sahuji's eyes meet. She thinks...
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oys_chill
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Posted on 12-09-04 1:01
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she thinks....would naniram mind? after all naniram was mere a backup to her lonely life. But sauji had a rippling effect on her. She fancies herself being a sauni of the everest momo ordering the workers to do this and that. She'd collect the money from the customers and say.....10 mins parkhinu parcha....ppl would call her everest momo ko sauni..she smiles .......:)
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Pink_floyd
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Posted on 12-09-04 1:01
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hyaaaaaaaaaaaaa jhyash bhayo yo post ta ! everyone wants their story to go in their own direction
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Pink_floyd
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Posted on 12-09-04 1:02
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so i am done with the posts for this story....... best of luck u guys
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whyhappy
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Posted on 12-09-04 1:11
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Pragya thinks ........ OH.......!!!! How handsome......!!!! My Naniram doesn't know how to wear a shirt.....sometime he wears ironed shirt .some time does not...... ..see I have to pay this momo's price too.... doesn't have job and money either....he always asks money with his mother...Yeah .... his father is a bhansar hakim at Birgung, his mother works as a branch manager at Nepal Bank Limited,Dharmapath branch....Umm...When did I see this guy...??? Must be at Noble academy!!!!umm....Hya.. I left that college three years ago....
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