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Posted on 01-31-08 12:16 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Lost

 

World full of love,

But my love is lost.

Searching it in darkness,

Light is beyond my reach.

 

World full of happiness

But my happiness is lost

Trying to be happy,

Sorrow is swallowing me

 

World full of life

But my life is lost.

Fighting to be alive,

Death is chasing me.

 

World full of destination,

But my destination is lost.

Searching it in maze of life,

Clue is unknown to me.

 

World full of hope,

But my hope is lost.

Creating a hope,

Creation is drowning.

 

World full of color,

But color of my life is lost.

Painting it with beauty,

Beauty is smashed.

 

World full of music,

But rhythm of my life is lost.

Playing a tune,

Piano is broken down.


 
Posted on 01-31-08 4:46 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Carixma Ji,

World full of life

But my life is lost.

Fighting to be alive,

Death is chasing me.

 

It is really sad stanza but I like the way you gave shape to words and depth of feelings. Keep it up!

 

This always reminds me we are mortal, aren't we?

 

 

 

 


 
Posted on 01-31-08 5:04 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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 Carixma,

Good one. The flow is smooth and lines are full of emotions. I hope those words are not coming straight from your heart. I feel sorry for you if you really lose all those stuffs.

This paragraph from "Woody Allen" comes to my mind talking about love... "To love is to suffer. To avoid suffering one must not love. But then one suffers from not loving. Therefore to love is to suffer, not to love is to suffer. To suffer is to suffer. To be happy is to love. To be happy then is to suffer. But suffering makes one unhappy. Therefore, to be unhappy one must love, or love to suffer, or suffer from too much happiness. I hope you're getting this down."  

And, when the door of happiness closes, another opens but often times we look so hard at the closed door that we don't see the one which has been opened for us. It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. So, cheer up gurl..


 
Posted on 01-31-08 5:09 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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ओहो, कत्रो फिलोसोफि गयो त येहाँ कबि  नेप्चे ज्यु बाट।

लौ न तेसो भये म के गरु त अब?

Should I love or not ? ke chyangba sanga mero tragedy nai parne bho ta?


 
Posted on 01-31-08 5:20 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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कथाकार CL ज्यु,

त्यो मेरो फिलोसोफी हैन। उडी एलेन को त्यो प्रसँग प्रेमको कुरा आएर उप्काको मात्र हो मैले। प्रेम आँफै मा खराब हैन, त्यो त प्रेम गर्ने मान्छेमा भर पर्ने कुरा हो। प्रेममा जती खुसी लुकेको हुन्छ, तेस्को दोब्बर पिडा बिछोड हुँदा प्रकट हुन्छ। प्रेम को आगो मा हामफाल्नु अगाडी एक चोटि राम्रो सँग चाइ सोच्नै पर्छ होला।

अब च्याङ्बा सँग tragedy पर्छ कि बिहा नै हुन्छ, त्यो त मलाई के था नि? च्याङ्बा लाई नै सोधे बेस होला क्यारे।


 
Posted on 01-31-08 5:26 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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च्याङ्बा सङ के हुन्छ भनेर त ज्योतिश देखाउनु पर्ला?

च्याङ्बालाइ के सोध्नु। उ त २४ घन्टा तोङ्बाको ट्रिपमा हुन्छ।
तपाइलाइ ज्योतिश सास्त्र आँउदैन?
एकचोटि मेरो हात हेरिदिनुन तेसोभये।

हे हे हे


 
Posted on 01-31-08 5:26 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Mr Chora..

Well its tue that we dont realize how much we wanted it until we lose it. But why is it necessary for something to arrive that i dont even know how would i feel when it arrives. How abt we start a new thread that wud talk about how to get back  things that we have had already lost rather than cheering up for a new one to arrive ( you dont even know in what condition it arrives)......

ChicagoBears


 
Posted on 01-31-08 5:46 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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ChicagoBears,

Regarding arriving part, someone said "You get best thing in life when you are not looking for it." I guess that's somewhat true.

CL ज्यु, ज्योतिस शास्त्र को कुरा गर्ने हो भने त, "किरो" भन्ने ज्योतिस को हस्तरेखा सम्बन्धी २-४ वटा किताब त पढेको हो।  अब हात नै हेरी दिनुस भन्नु हुन्छ भने म नाइ कसरी भनु। 

 


 
Posted on 01-31-08 6:08 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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yes you can get smth best when u dont want. But how can it be best when i never wished for it then smth that i 'm wishing for...I dont know what happens in long run but i live momentarily. I guess we all like to be happy today then to dream for the happiness then i have no cluse whenh will it arrive..


 


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